Mother’s day has come again.
On this day I hope she stays.
To receive my love like endless rain.
Hope you remember for endless days.
Emily says her mom she loves.
Right now, back then, in future too.
So accept this gift like snow-white doves.
Do remember your girl, she loves you.
All her gratitude expressed through this.
You, a mom, your daughter everyday miss.
兒女聽話，不惹父母生氣應該就是最好的禮物，能獲得有創意的心意卡就更是欣慰了
(Empty)
啊！很有心思呢，溫馨甜蜜。師父你今天一定很開心了！
祝健康快樂
又 聽話 ，又有心思 意 ，全詩押韻俱 創意 ，開心不會止於母親節啊 ! 明天又放假啦， Enjoy your holiday!
[版主回覆05/09/2011 22:41:00]希望會英文的朋友多點評指教
我天天都很開心啊 愿大家也一樣開心快樂
(Empty)
Comes round Mother s day
always she is with me I crave
like unceasing rain I shall spray
my love for her all the way
within my heart there s a space
where my mom will always stay
our love for each other will never fade
thru eternity and all the way.
(just a little version I have seen from somewhere)
correction
line four should be
my love for her in every way
[版主回覆05/15/2011 00:41:00]Hey there, There's no right or wrong when it comes to poems, or should I say literature. Besides I need to start that line with a H. Thanks for sharing the poem below, it's really nice. Emily
Dear Emily
Line four is the number four line on the version I quoted,
not yours. Thank you for your kind attention!
[版主回覆05/15/2011 22:28:00]Dear Young and Handsome, Haha sorry I misunderstood what you said 🙂 Oh wells. Thank you for leaving your comment! Emily
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